Title: 5/5
It ain't original but it isn't part of the critera so you got 5/5!
Congrats! Interesting title and I can feel a vibe, like wanting to watch that kind of show.
Poster/Trailer: 6/10
It's crowded and not appealing. The top part looks really awesome, but when it gets to
the bottom part... not anymore. You can request from rainbow fountain for a poster... or I can offer to help :)
Description: 9.5/10
Good description. Best to use 'two' instead of '2' though.
Foreword: NA/10
You just repeated in the description...
Character Profiles (if you got one): 3/5
You didn't put traits, but just the looks which some people would forget anyway.
Plot: 37/40
Well it is somewhat interesting, though it isn't original.
Writing: 18/20
Good, lots of grammatical mistakes.. but good enough.
I like the way you write, it's interesting.
Chap. Titles: 4/5
It connects to the story all right and it is pretty simple.
Rated Scenes (if it has): 9/10
Normal and simple, not too extravagant.
Ending (if completed): 18/20
Well the ending ended abruptly, but I like the idea.
TOTAL: 109.5/125
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