Your Love is a Lie - BatmanNRobin
Reviewer: Aljo
Title: 4.5/5
Well it's common and a bit cliche, but it's simple and can get attention from some readers.
Poster/Trailer: 7/10
Chapter banners I'll give it a 7
Description: 9/10
A very simple description but it's cool. I like how you add in those colors for the emotions. +1
Foreword: 10/10
Nice! I like how you put a small dictionary thing there because they're students. +1 Also I like how simple your foreword is, readers could be lazy in reading those things.
Character Profiles (if you got one): 5/5
Great!
Plot: 39/40
It's original and somewhat interesting.
Writing: 18/20
You don't have a lot of grammar errors! Good Job!
But I find your writing style a bit boring. And some words are redundant (Being a teenager sucks chapter 3) but that's okay.
Chap. Titles: 5/5
Awesome titles! Makes me want to read your chapter. +1
Rated Scenes (if it has): NA/10
Ending (if completed): NA/20
Remarks:
Awesome story! Continue it :)
You got 3 bonus points (the +1 things you can see)
TOTAL: 97.5+3/120 = 101/120
=81/100 B-
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